Re: beautiful

I would appreciate any comments you may have about the poem that I just posted (that appears right below this post), entitled "beautiful." I've had many varying reactions; it seems to be quite controversial!

Thank you for reading!

Rey

beautiful

beautiful

i am so beautiful.

sparkling eyes;
full lips
opening into a perfect smile.

i am surrounded
by people who adore me;
worship me;
vie for my attention.

too bad
they just want to fuck.

i am so fucking beautiful.

A lesson...

"Well-timed silence hath more eloquence than speech."

Martin Fraquhar Tupper